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Could use some proofing for my 7990 review

Postposted on Sun Apr 28, 2013 8:58 pm

I'm a typo machine. See what you can find, if you would.

http://techreport.com/review/24703/amd- ... 0930e52fd4
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Re: Could use some proofing for my 7990 review

Postposted on Sun Apr 28, 2013 9:11 pm

On the page for Crysis 3,

Damage wrote:For the multi-GPU cards like the GTX 690 and 7900, though, the Fraps and FCAT results diverge.


Should be 7990.
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Re: Could use some proofing for my 7990 review

Postposted on Sun Apr 28, 2013 10:06 pm

Thanks for the preview. I didn't find much that needed to be tweaked. I've put it into a PM.
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Re: Could use some proofing for my 7990 review

Postposted on Sun Apr 28, 2013 10:10 pm

Last page.
Throw in the fact that it ships with a ridiculous bundle packed with some of the most notable games of the past year and it's easy to see how the 7990 could grab the crown in the $1K graphics card market.
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Re: Could use some proofing for my 7990 review

Postposted on Sun Apr 28, 2013 10:12 pm

Some of these are debatable.

Paragraph 1:
Our next task, I said in that article, was to address the issue of multi-GPU microstuttering, as it's called, in more depth. [as I said in that article] OR [switch "our next task" and "As I said in that article].

[Also maybe "was" should be "is"]

Paragraph 6:
That product didn't arrive as anticipated, and we nearly gave up hope that it ever would. [Delete Comma]

Paragraph 7:
but those products didn't ship until later last year, in extremely limited volumes. [late last year]
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Re: Could use some proofing for my 7990 review

Postposted on Sun Apr 28, 2013 10:27 pm

Thanks, folks! I made some tweaks, and the review is live now.
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