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Ithkul_prime wrote:Here is a good one
read a book on literature
not hook on Phonics
There are no standards
What you said is fluff afterall
you are just petty.
I give no credence
to what you said because
you are just the same
Forge wrote:3-7-5, huh?
Ikthul cannot write haikus
illiterate fool.
I suppose posting
good haikus requires skill
Ikthul seems to lack.
Ithkul_prime wrote:Well, then lets talk Haiku poems with substance with reguard to form.
Matsuo Basho (1640-1694?)
Heat-Lightning streak-
through darkness pierces
the Heron's Shriek
or his other Haiku poem
In the old stone pool
In the old stone pool
A frogjump:
Splushhhh.
neither of these poems even follow your form.
Hawkwing74 wrote:Ithkul_prime wrote:Well, then lets talk Haiku poems with substance with reguard to form.
Matsuo Basho (1640-1694?)
Heat-Lightning streak-
through darkness pierces
the Heron's Shriek
or his other Haiku poem
In the old stone pool
In the old stone pool
A frogjump:
Splushhhh.
neither of these poems even follow your form.
They did in the Japanese, didn't they? Maybe not, I can't remember.
What you call a haiku is very far from what is means.
Haiku means "beginning verse", and it does not have to follow the 17 syllabe structure. wihcih is the opnly prerequiste for a haiku. not the 5-7-5, it can be 1-15-1 also well if form is maintained.
Forge wrote:What you call a haiku is very far from what is means.
Haiku means "beginning verse", and it does not have to follow the 17 syllabe structure. wihcih is the opnly prerequiste for a haiku. not the 5-7-5, it can be 1-15-1 also well if form is maintained.
Neither of your haiku were 17 syllables at all. Want to try again?
Just what exactly makes a haiku, oh sage master?
Ithkul_prime wrote:Forge wrote:What you call a haiku is very far from what is means.
Haiku means "beginning verse", and it does not have to follow the 17 syllabe structure. wihcih is the opnly prerequiste for a haiku. not the 5-7-5, it can be 1-15-1 also well if form is maintained.
Neither of your haiku were 17 syllables at all. Want to try again?
Just what exactly makes a haiku, oh sage master?
The mighty point was, to consider that the 2 example haikus are
variations on the accepted standard. They are poems, Poetry should
never be treated as prose(normal writting). The 5-7-5 argument is only a
extension of prose. Poetry has a far more fluid form or even no
form. So, if grammar comes into play in a poem, please remember
poetic liesnce.
Ithkul_prime wrote:The mighty point was, to consider that the 2 example haikus are variations on the accepted standard. The 5-7-5 argument is only a extension of prose. Poetry has a far more fluid form or even no form. So, if grammar comes into play in a poem, please remember poetic liesnce.
1. A Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.
2. A poem written in this form.