stirker_0 wrote:oh wow.. wasnt quite expecting this, editted my thesis
The paradox and exaggeration of slaughterhouse-five emphasize the senselessness of war
question is does this sound like a thesis to you people or is it not even a sentence... ??
and oh yah it even says in the first chapter "This one is a failure, and had to be, since it was written by a pillar of salt. " (Vonnegut 22)
It's just a sentence right now. But you can make it a thesis. Try writing your introductory paragraph with that as the last sentence and let us see what you come up with. You may have to change that sentence to make it work with a paragraph.
Your quote is out of context too. Without knowing the subject, that quote is meaningless.